On my front cover something i could use to improve it for me real magazine would be to just use one main photo so that the focus is more on that photo. The second thing is to use more colours to brighten up my magazine instaed of using just one colour. The third thing is to make my coverlines shorter and snappier to make it better and so that it sounds better to draw the attention of the audience. A use of punctuation is another thing that i need to work on when doing my final magazine so that it is gramatically corretct.
On my contents page it is basically the same things that are wrong with the front cover such as the colour of the writing to make it bolder and to draw the attention of the audience in more. The second thing is to use shorter coverlines to make it stand out more so it is easier on the eye.
So overall i will need to make the coverlines shorter, use better and more colours on both the contents pages and the front cover page.
Kayne, you have completed the preliminary task, and identified areas that you can improve on when it comes to producing your main task.
ReplyDelete